in Mr Barclay writing class we were writing a recount about how we will feel if we were running in the olympics at the finals. We were doing that recount to worm up our writing after holydays, and so Mr Blarclay show us what kind of reading he is gonna do. in this recount the easyest part i found was making the slide, putting all thosse images to make it pretty was the easy part for me, and it didn´t take that long to do it. And the hardest part i found was making all my writing it was pretty hard find new words to include in my writing, and i took a long time to make the three pagrath. In the future i will try to make my writing more long and i will put more explanation to express myself and i will try to make my slide more pretty to make my writing more enteresting and eye catching. What also do you think i could add into my writing?

My follow Activities week 1-2

In Mrs bava's reading group the group kairangi were reading about the athlets in our first NZ national team in the olympics the book has a lot of things that it could teach you a lot of ouf first olympians. In my follow up it was easy to do the create because i have already done the activitie that we have to do in our create and i found easy to do the Wonderopolys because the questions were easy. the hardest thing i did is the can do i did'nt know how to explain some of the words but i kinda reconize them so i just try and hopefully they were right. in the future i will trie to do my create with more details in the medals and i want to make my anwsers more long and with more sentences and i think that will ba all. I REALLY ENJOY THE BOOK YOU SHOULD READ IT TOO!!!! what also do you think i should do next time?

My Olympics values create

in this actibity me and my class mates were learning about olympics values which they are: respect, friendship and excellence. We were learning about what do they mean and how you can use them, we did too learn some new things about the olympics and about the gold, silver and bronze medal, aand we were learning about what things you can use for have a strong body and a strong brain. At the end of our must do we were told to do a create, i did my create with addison and i think that was the easy part i found in this inquary but the easyst part in the crate was doing the medals, they were so easy you just have to do a circle and write something inside. I think the hardest part i found on my create was doing the decorations of the medal they were kinda hard to do and i know it will take to long so i just didn't make them. If there is another opportunity that i can make this again i will try this time to make the decorations in the medal and make it looks more like a medal. Next i will make it better. What did you think i should put in my create next time?.

My poetry

We make this to work in our adjetives and our verbs, in this Mrs Gomm gave us one picture and then we have to go make a doc and there put all the nouns we see in the image and then write the adjetive we think the noun got and then the verb. i found it easy to look for the adjetives for the nouns it was really easy cause you can descrive every noun you could see. i found hard to look for make the verbs cause some of the things i didn't really find them

Why do we have to be prepared for a natural disaster.

We were learning about a new way to write. Is call EXPOSITION there you can persuade someone and tell them good reasons about something you want them to think, i did this to persuade peoples to be prepared for a natural disaster cause they could be really dangerous. i found it easy to publish to a slide is one of my favourite things in writing cause i can make the writing colorful and put some cool background but first i have to edit my write. i found it hard to make my write cause first i have to write it in my book after check spelling errors then write all of that in my cromebook which it take a lot of time and then i have to edit and a lot of things more, and ALL of that without help. It was pretty hard. Next time i will make more details cause i sure i didn't explain myself really well and i didn't use to much adjetives an verbs so i will try do it better next year in intermide.

My book review week 5-6

My follow activities from week 5-6

i was learning about peter te great and his story i learn more about white islands and volcanos, one thing i learn is that only 10 mens were working on the white islands. i found it easy to do my follow activities in my group we all got different reading levels so usually we do diferent slides but this time we do the same slide so the teacher have to put a easy slide so everyone can do it. i haven't done the volcano but i'm pretty sure that when we do it it's gonna be really hard but very fun. next time i will try do it with more details like use all the space in the slide.