in Mr Barclay writing class we were writing a recount about how we will feel if we were running in the olympics at the finals. We were doing that recount to worm up our writing after holydays, and so Mr Blarclay show us what kind of reading he is gonna do. in this recount the easyest part i found was making the slide, putting all thosse images to make it pretty was the easy part for me, and it didn´t take that long to do it. And the hardest part i found was making all my writing it was pretty hard find new words to include in my writing, and i took a long time to make the three pagrath. In the future i will try to make my writing more long and i will put more explanation to express myself and i will try to make my slide more pretty to make my writing more enteresting and eye catching. What also do you think i could add into my writing?